I think the hair is too complex - i.e. too many shapes, and also, you keep changing the head shape as well as everything else! The logical thing would be to decide on a head shape, and then change the hair, while keeping the head shape the same etc. otherwise we'll never be able to discern what we think about what we're being shown. Take a look at this:
Look at the Art Of and how this student worked up her character design using simple shapes and a logical system of variation as she moved towards finalising his look...
I think the hair is too complex - i.e. too many shapes, and also, you keep changing the head shape as well as everything else! The logical thing would be to decide on a head shape, and then change the hair, while keeping the head shape the same etc. otherwise we'll never be able to discern what we think about what we're being shown. Take a look at this:
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Look at the Art Of and how this student worked up her character design using simple shapes and a logical system of variation as she moved towards finalising his look...
okay thanks phil.
Deletehave you seen my recent post? I developed one face into 4 choices